I didnt think about the rhyme till I looked up the film on youtube and I found an animation of the poem. Made me think that is where the Coen Bros got their title. I hadn't thought of the link before!

For me this goes beyond desiring an ideal-because I know these men who aren't there really are not ideal at all. Even interacting with them on quite a superficial level makes me feel not great. Because it is like interacting with a brick wall, or a mirror or something. I am determined to learn some lessons now I have written this down!

Thanks so much for your comment. This is a personal piece and it is nice to know it resonates with someone else.

That's what I love about poetry. It can reflect whatever you want it to but only you will know the exact meaning. I love how it's an interpretation of feeling and emotion and how sometimes you don't even need a diary entry, all you need it to joint down a poem and you'll feel better.

But nonetheless, that was nothing short of remarkable. I loved your use of words and phrases to give it a slightly double meaning. *to me at least* Beautiful job!

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